Nice overall look, but unfortunately it's focused on her sleeve and not her eyes... :/
It doesn't look out of focus so much as it just looks like the lens is really soft. And it's really noisy for some reason, that can contribute to loss of sharpness. Can't really tell because it's so dark
Why is it so noisy, anyways? You shouldn't need high iso in studio shots, since you have control of light. My studio shots are 200 iso max.
As far as appearance, I think it could use more front lighting