Alright I'm back my dudes. Sorry for the hiatus. I had to prepare for some important volunteer work for a camp, but I am back.
Firstly, 7/10. The direction that your art is going for and the grossly goofy style is great, but I feel some of these characters need structure and certain textures are either too blurry or feel out of place. I think the shades and tints should be more solid to keep the artwork consistent.
I got something Ive been working on. It's a 3D model but Im calling it art.
It's not done yet
8/10 This is looking good so far! I think the bottom muscle under the tongue should be pushed back a little more. Otherwise great design!