Very nicely done! There should be more Stanley Parable-type adventures for the gamemode system. There were some grammar errors, and you can mess up the game in a multitude of ways (after you make some choices you aren't prevented from going back and choosing another, i.e open the grate then go back and fall in the pit before the traps fire), and the narrations were also a bit too exaggerated and the narrator was too impatient in some parts, but overall still very high quality. You should make more, that would be nice.