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Games / Re: Terraria: Mages, Wizards, and Warlocks Guild.

« on: June 05, 2011, 10:01:02 PM »

In game name: Lagnur
Why we should pick you: Long time Terraria player, collector of items and a quick builder, and I have almost all the magic items and use them alot.
How could we trust you: I dont inventory hack at all nor map edit, and I do not grief as I used to be a part of many servers.
Pick which the armor or the wizard hat: Hat all the way.

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Creativity / Re: Should I make an entire story of this? (Fallout: New Vegas novel)

« on: June 05, 2011, 07:41:58 PM »

Sirrus hit the nail on the head with his remarks, but I think he failed to mention something even more crucial.

A great writer, in his example Tom Clancy, would in fact be able to drop us in the middle of the story, know nothing about the characters, but still make us want to follow them. That's writing. Being able to relate to your reader, keep them interested, questioning what's going to happen so they want to resolve the conflict.

This is a proven psychological effect, the brain does not like unanswered questions. Why do you think cliff hangers are so effective? And while yes, your writing was boring, unoriginal, and uninspiring to say the least, your "snippet," if we can even call it that as I doubt you have a larger story actually written, is so much just an interaction, it leads me to believe no plot even exists.

We're not saying you can't get better, we're just saying that this is horrid and that you should only continue it when you've bettered yourself at the art of writing.

No he should never continue or type another fictional sentence. And he will most likely never be able to better his writing.

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Creativity / Help editing?

« on: June 05, 2011, 06:26:46 PM »

I am making an edit of a player in this game which is  taking slow as having to click on the palet, save, find the next state, open, repeat. Is there a faster way of doing that if so what way and what program?

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Creativity / Re: Should I make an entire story of this? (Fallout: New Vegas novel)

« on: June 05, 2011, 06:24:22 PM »

I support Sirrus fully, and your  "I wasn't trying to edit"  reply was absolutely handicapped. The biggest steps in the writing process are making a rough draft, then editing and revising. If you did not know that and tried to write you will never have a true successful writing career, that also backs up Sirrus as you being a lazy illiterate forget who cuts corners in the writing process.

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Off Topic / Re: So i'm moving into a new room. MORE INFO, Links instead of pics though :c

« on: June 05, 2011, 01:46:27 AM »

Both are messy as forget.

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Forum Games / Re: Scrabble Slam

« on: June 05, 2011, 01:46:00 AM »

Mine.

Meme

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Off Topic / Re: Post your thoughts of the above user's signature.

« on: June 05, 2011, 01:45:17 AM »

92 internets

Ewww.

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Creativity / Re: Papercraft Thread

« on: June 05, 2011, 01:40:23 AM »

I just use regular scissors :P

Scissors are had as forget though :c

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Forum Games / Re: Norm the Genie

« on: June 05, 2011, 12:25:50 AM »

The cookie appears, but your hands are cut off and hold the plate in another country.

I wish for team fortress 2 to work on my pc.

It works but your PC combusts into violent flames after two minutes as the heavy.

I wish for a  living beautiful asian prostitute with no  diseases in my room sitting on my lap attatched to my body.

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Creativity / Re: Papercraft Thread

« on: June 05, 2011, 12:23:12 AM »

Quick question. I've been doing PO for about two years and have used Xacto knives. What do you use Malestorm to complete them that quick as my Xacto knives take hours.

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Games / Re: Project Zomboid: A Zombies RPG with elements of Action and Morality!

« on: June 05, 2011, 12:07:46 AM »

Can someone get this for me and I will pay them in Paypal for it? I dont do Google Checkout.

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Forum Games / Re: Norm the Genie

« on: June 05, 2011, 12:05:14 AM »

You rent a condo but never make it there.

I wish for a perfect cookie on a plate in my hands at the perfect temperature.

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Off Topic / Re: Post your thoughts of the above user's signature.

« on: June 05, 2011, 12:02:03 AM »

forget you and forget your children.


Ha, it's funny because he probably is...

Pretty nice. Also C and H :D

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Creativity / Re: Papercraft Thread

« on: June 04, 2011, 11:54:55 PM »

Where do you get your designs Male?

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Creativity / Re: Should I make an entire story of this? (Fallout: New Vegas novel)

« on: June 04, 2011, 11:54:03 PM »

Your writing is stiff and uninteresting. Your "snippet" of the story was pulled from the middle of the story, and as such the characters are completely irrelevant to me, there are no descriptions of anything so I can't relate to anyone or anything in the story. This makes it incredibly boring and arduous to read. Your verbs and adjectives and general phrasing is pedestrian and doesn't make me excited to see any more of your writing.

Start from the beginning of the story.

Dont forget he doesnt even edit or loving revise at all.