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the main purpose of the series was to keep it short (~4 minutes) and i'll attempt to chock some more content into that 4 minutes but it's going to be a squeeze
thanks

you know how some dudes will do videos no punctuation style? you could do that. just like, edit out all of the pauses to make it seem like you're talking fast. it's way easier to fit stuff in that way.

sorry if i'm being brutal with any of this, i'm trying to be as constructive as possible

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Off Topic / Re: Daswiruch's stufffest of a Channel

« on: June 11, 2016, 01:15:35 AM »

Quote from: Daswiruch on June 11, 2016, 01:04:51 AM

thanks for your input dude
the series was going to be just me sitting in front of a camera talking for ~4 minutes like this first one was but i guess just sitting down and venting isn't something that people really want to see
it's meant to be unscripted because that's just how i flow but i guess i'll plan it out next time
i couldn't show the actual game beacuse i don't feel right using other youtubers' footage and recording a screen with a camera would be stuff but i guess i'll try it

is there anything that you would like to see in the future?

it seems appealing at first to do that but really it's just lazy, man. put more work into it and do editing and you'll feel really accomplished, and people will like your videos better. using others' footage is alright as long as you give credit and actually do something with it, as in responding to it and such, which is the point of the video so you'd be fine. i'd like you to, later, when you're feeling more motivated, include maybe some articles written about it, other reviews, comments made by the developers. put as much stuff as possible pertaining to arguing your point

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Off Topic / Re: Daswiruch's stufffest of a Channel

« on: June 11, 2016, 01:04:26 AM »

if it says anything, i thought your intro was a joke that would lead to a better video. i then skipped around and realized that it actually was just you sitting in front of the camera the entire time.

i didn't feel any interest in watching the whole thing. i couldn't focus on what you were saying because your speech was so scattered with "uhhh" and mouth clicking.

i like your voice and i think it could be utilized in such a better fashion. write out a script, practice it, and try to say it quickly, and show us the actual game. what i just saw was just not interesting.

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Off Topic / Re: CHILL AF AS forget V4

« on: June 10, 2016, 11:16:59 PM »

ive been finding so much more chill hiphop to listen to and it's wonderful

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Off Topic / Re: CHILL AF AS forget V4

« on: June 10, 2016, 04:02:30 PM »

Quote from: Zack on June 10, 2016, 04:00:37 PM

I always seem to have a good day because I honestly feel my life is complete right now. I have friends to talk to, a roof over my head, food, and despite my overall seemingly stuffty situation, I genuinely feel this is one of the best moments of my life.

And now that my summer break has finally started, I can actually get to burn off that stress I've built up over like a year. I'm very hopeful of these next coming months.

I'm not kidding when I say I'm your opposite in this regard.

yoooooo that's the stuff i like to hear

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Off Topic / CHILL AF AS forget V4

« on: June 10, 2016, 03:51:16 PM »

https://forum.blockland.us/index.php?topic=290053.msg8777522#msg8777522 a continuation

just chill. tell us about your day. get somethin off your mind. de-stress your breasts.

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