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Off Topic / Re: My Little Pony: Friendship for Blockheads: General V2
« on: October 29, 2011, 01:39:55 AM »
It doesn't.
I just have a boner.
I just have a boner.
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forget how am i supposed to fap to maid octavia when my hand's been destroyed by thirdstyleI'll fap for you.
forget
he didnt insult youCheck my edit.
at all
>get constructive criticism>Calls it constructive criticism.
>respond by saying forget you
No. This is not an opinion, this is how writing works. Everyone shouldn't have to conform to your horrendously sloppy writing style. Either write with something resembling proper structure or your work will be deemed "total horse stuff", thrown in a shredder, burned, and finally shot into the sun so nobody would ever have to read that literary train wreck ever again.Is that constructive criticism?
shot by a sniper in TF2.I happened to kill a few people with the machina.
god damn machinas
You say that now, but habits are a tough thing to break. Keep writing like this and you'll become too accustomed to it and then the transition to proper writing will be a difficult one.Alright master, I'll do what you say since you clearly have control over me and care about me so much.
I feel awkward knowing that I unintentionally started that argument
I hope you know how to grammar as well.What?
Truth is, you're flipping your stuff and downright insulting him because he is trying to tell you how to improve your writing skill. He is coming off as an starfish, but insulting him isn't going to do anything.I know how to right fairly well, I just don't like starting new paragraphs every time somebody new has to speak. That's a lot of paragraphs, and I just see them unnecessary.
This is not something just to please myself, this is something he will need to know to graduate. For now, I'm just going to assume that he is still in elementary school No and has simply never learned how to write dialogue. Incorrect If that is the case, then the sooner you start learning how to write properly, the better prepared you will be for the future. If that isn't the case, then holy stuff get your act together.Alright, if it makes you throw so much of a temper tantrum then I'll do the next one the way to please oh lord of all fanfics.