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Off Topic / Re: My Life is Average vs. F My Life
« on: December 19, 2009, 09:12:34 PM »

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Off Topic / Re: My Life is Average vs. F My Life
« on: December 19, 2009, 09:08:51 PM »
MLIA wins.
Suck it, FML.

2628
Suggestions & Requests / Re: Whip
« on: December 19, 2009, 08:32:06 PM »
sorry it's short. Thanks.

What he said.

2629
Creativity / Re: New Story: The Voices
« on: December 19, 2009, 08:14:38 PM »


Terrifying but adorable.
Just like me.
<3

2630
Drama / Re: Jak595
« on: December 19, 2009, 08:09:46 PM »
I love all of you

Feeling cheery today are we?

2631
Creativity / Re: New Story: The Voices
« on: December 19, 2009, 08:08:47 PM »
To whomever rated 'terrible':
I would like some feedback.

2632
Forum Games / Re: Avatar Rating
« on: December 19, 2009, 06:40:42 PM »
That, or he doesn't like your avatar.

2633
Forum Games / Re: Name Rating
« on: December 19, 2009, 06:39:04 PM »
((-1/10)/10)*-800

2634
Off Topic / Re: How stupid are you?
« on: December 19, 2009, 06:03:33 PM »
I'm twelve and single!
That definitely narrows it down to where you know where I live!
Damn son, I goan get myself raped!

2635
Games / Re: Small Contraptions in GMod
« on: December 19, 2009, 05:30:03 PM »
That's why I said "should try" learn to read into the text.

It isn't reading I messed up on, it was comprehension.
Get it right.

And sorry, I misunderstood you.

2636
Games / Re: Small Contraptions in GMod
« on: December 19, 2009, 05:26:01 PM »
MAKE A PONY

Make me lasagna pony.



NOW.

You should try and tackle a big project, like a mech that can walk and stuff.

Big =/= Small.  Try again.

2637
Drama / Re: Rainbow Road
« on: December 19, 2009, 05:23:26 PM »
true but. .. i bump with a fashion and i help people who get flamed and trolled on the internet

WOW.
You're stupid.

2638
Off Topic / Re: Ctrl + V game.
« on: December 19, 2009, 03:56:08 PM »

Huh.
Weird.

EDIT for new: Don't ever play dizzy bat in the snow wearing only boxers and shoes ever again.

2639
Creativity / New Story: The Voices
« on: December 19, 2009, 03:50:22 PM »
I started today, and I am happy that I am back using Word--I love ya Google, but GDocs isn't my favorite thing in the world.

Anyways, this is what I have so far.  Notify me of typos 'n' schtuff.

Quote from: The Voices
   I have always been different.  Hearing things others don’t, seeing things others don’t, sometimes even feeling things others don’t—this is rare, but it has happened.
   They say that people like me are crazy; I know for a fact that this is not true, for if I were crazy how could I be here talking to you?  People have told me that I will never amount to anything, that I will be an outcast all my life; maybe they’re right and maybe not, but that does not concern me.  What I am here to tell you about is what happened the night of April 21st, 2007—and every night after that until January 1st, 2010.

   You see, I sometimes hear voices; a raspy, deep, and very quiet voice, almost a whisper, maybe less.  But they--these voices--have never said anything up until that day. It was a Saturday, I remember that, and it was sometime around ten o’clock at night.  So faint at first, but day after day they grew louder, and less tolerable.
   But it became worse, because you see: with every voice there must be a body to go with it.  And it was when I realized that it wasn’t just sounds I was hearing, but things I was seeing that I realized that this did not exist purely within my subconscious, but in the real world.
   I was one of the few people here that could see these things.
   And I was the only that could stop them.

I like it so far.  I might finish it--I haven't done that in a long time.

Constructive criticism encouraged!

News/Updates:
  • Posted snippet.
  • Fixed a past tense/present tense contradiction.
  • Changed title.
  • Poll added.
  • Wording changed

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Suggestions & Requests / Re: My ideas...
« on: December 19, 2009, 03:20:04 PM »
Just undulate.

Oh, then never mind.

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