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Off Topic / Re: Mah new novel - Strata
« on: February 12, 2011, 09:16:46 PM »
All I am saying is that a well-rounded author edits their work. You are being lazy by refusing to learn correct grammar and sentence structure now, there is no excuse. You will kick yourself when you have to do it later... that is, if you finish the book. I question your commitment to it now.

All you have to do is send me a PM with all the errors underlined, or post it. then i will.

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Off Topic / Re: Mah new novel - Strata
« on: February 12, 2011, 09:14:11 PM »
All I am saying is that a well-rounded author edits their work. You are being lazy by refusing to learn correct grammar and sentence structure now, there is no excuse. You will kick yourself when you do it later... that is, if you finish the book. I question your commitment to it now.

I'm doing it for the fun of it only. i dont want to be famous for it, Dren. Do you think that a 10 year old wants to go through that? (i know that sounded stupid and i don't really mean it)

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Off Topic / Re: Mah new novel - Strata
« on: February 12, 2011, 08:49:28 PM »
So do you want to be famous for it?
Or do you just need to express your teenage angst?Yeah, the friends that probably said they could read it find like this:
"ya i can reed it its cool lol :D"

That, and each quote starts a new paragraph.



I'm hurt.

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Off Topic / Re: Mah new novel - Strata
« on: February 12, 2011, 08:49:00 PM »
And that.


तुम अब मेरे अच्छे पड़ोसी हैं. हम कर सकते हैं दोस्तों हो सकता है?

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Off Topic / Re: Mah new novel - Strata
« on: February 12, 2011, 08:48:04 PM »
Take this.


हैलो

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Off Topic / Re: Mah new novel - Strata
« on: February 12, 2011, 08:45:41 PM »
So do you want to be famous for it?
Or do you just need to express your teenage angst?Yeah, the friends that probably said they could read it find like this:
"ya i can reed it its cool lol :D"

That, and each quote starts a new paragraph.


They said it verbally, and their not handicaps, Dren.
Smallest Chapters EVER.


It's a Short novel.


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Off Topic / Re: Blockland Skype chat
« on: February 12, 2011, 08:35:12 PM »
ningyou. what's your skype name?

10523
Off Topic / Re: Laptop wont startup
« on: February 12, 2011, 08:15:36 PM »
one question - How did you do this topic then?

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Off Topic / Re: Mah new novel - Strata
« on: February 12, 2011, 08:11:29 PM »
Its on the verge of being unreadable in its current state. You won't regret it if you take our advice. :/

I don't really know what your talking about, my friends say they can read it just fine...

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Off Topic / Re: Blockland Skype chat
« on: February 12, 2011, 07:56:44 PM »
it isn't nymethus. i checked.

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Off Topic / Re: Blockland Skype chat
« on: February 12, 2011, 07:35:46 PM »
:)

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Off Topic / Blockland Skype chat
« on: February 12, 2011, 07:35:10 PM »
Hey guys! I have a skype account set up and i will be willing to skype with fellow blocklanders!


Skype name = hodototman1


send me request, we'll talk.   BTW i'm 13 years old.

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Off Topic / Re: Mah new novel - Strata
« on: February 12, 2011, 07:28:57 PM »
oh yeah... sorry about going crazy... i know i should fix those errors. i am just dumb. very.

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Off Topic / Re: Mah new novel - Strata
« on: February 12, 2011, 07:26:04 PM »
Learn how to make compound sentences and the. Come back to me...

Remember, CREATIVITY is my goal here...

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