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Creativity / Re: Aftermath - A book I want to write.
« on: September 16, 2010, 07:22:49 PM »Is this like a rough draft or something?Please read topic.
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Is this like a rough draft or something?Please read topic.
If you're going to ask for critique on your work, you should post the full item because some won't pass positive judgment on something that's so underdone.It is a start for me, and all things start somewhere. :/
I totally agree with you on the motion blur issue. I started playing and I immediately noticed it.Well, the ending is already given away. From the book, and the other 3 games.
The story was excellent though, and the game ended just the way it should have. Perfect.
...A chapter needs more than a simple paragraph.
So? should I keep going? However, this is just a quicker write version of what I have thought of, each chapter will be more than 3 times of what I did for chapter 2.
You can play multiplayer on rust.That is on every payback kill you get. Or good shot. ;/
I'll let you in on a not-so secret.
On rust when you die money flies everywhere not blood
The OP link. The one you posted yesterday that started this silliness. Go look at it.
Nevermind
Post link naow plzNevermind.
Guys who don't shave or at least keep their pubes trimmed short are loving disgusting. Same with pit hair.I don't need to yet. I am just starting to grow a beard, moustache. Facial hair came late for me. But I have an enchanted forest of pubes. :D
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