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Creativity / Re: Short Story (EDIT: *sigh* based on Minecraft)
« on: March 01, 2012, 04:06:26 PM »
I appreciate boundless praise, but I could use how to make it better, too, so post any ideas you might have on revising previous sections and/or where you might like the end to go. I've got a general idea on how I want it to end, but I feel like it's too cliche.








