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Creativity / Re: Admiral Obvious Writes Stuff
« on: March 14, 2016, 08:30:44 PM »
I don't know what "SedEm" means, which is bad. it feels like I'm missing out on something important
dunno what "N.A.W." means either, nor "F.I."
it just feels like you're piling on a whole lot of extraneous information before we have even an idea of what's actually going on. like, what's "Legislation 19609"? I have no idea, but you don't mention it again, so it doesn't seem like it's all that important right now

also, it's spelled rendezvous. just in case that's why you wrote "rondy"
if you just wanted it to sound like he was using slang then nevermind, but it's still pretty cheesy

Yeah, that stuff is revealed over time. Take note that this novel takes place almost 1000 years in the future, so there will be new slang and other unfamiliar terms. I try my best to naturally explain those concepts as the story goes on, but naturally might also mean slowly.

But, just so you know, SedEm is "SEDation EMbalment," a chemical mixture that is injected when a soldier's suit detects heavy physical trauma. It preserves a soldier for future revival by putting them into a deep hibernation. N.A.W and F.I. are the acronyms for the two main warring corporations, the full names of which are revealed later on.

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North Korea claims it can wipe out the whole of Manhattan with hydrogen tipped ballistic missile.

Meanwhile, the state of Manhattan claims it could wipe out North Korea.

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Off Topic / Re: Bad/weird stuff you see on deviantArt - Megathread
« on: March 12, 2016, 10:17:46 PM »

Source
Let's make it a habit to post the source link every time.

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Creativity / Admiral Obvious Writes Stuff
« on: March 12, 2016, 10:14:38 PM »
I thought I would post a couple of my, uh, novels that I've been writing. The genre is sci-fi, with the first being more of an action/war novel and the second being an adventure/fantasy novel. And yes, you can probably see my real name somewhere, I don't care. Fell free to add comments to the doc, or feedback here.

The Harmless War

Lost Planet
(^Title is a WIP)

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Forum Games / Re: Corrupt A Wish 3.0
« on: March 10, 2016, 05:39:57 PM »
Granted, but Stockholm Syndrome causes you both to eventually become the best of friends.

I wish I had more motivation.

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Forum Games / Re: ONE WORD STORY
« on: February 26, 2016, 05:38:31 PM »
Ackrog,

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Forum Games / Re: YOU LAUGH YOU LOSE v666
« on: February 16, 2016, 05:20:11 PM »

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Off Topic / Re: The Powerpuff Girls released a new clip
« on: February 11, 2016, 08:02:54 PM »
hip terms summary of vid
buttercup gets triggered by a misogynist who calls her a princess and beats him up
^^^

I hope they're not so blatant with the actual show, else I cringe.

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Off Topic / Re: Finebros are now trademarking reaction videos
« on: February 07, 2016, 01:42:10 PM »


Dem dislikes.

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I once thought of a game where you could draw your units and buildings, and some smart AI would know what you were trying to draw; the catch being that more complicated drawings were more powerful and you would have to draw every unit (no copy/pasting).

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Badspot blocked clients from getting health information from everyone including themselves, so there's no way of getting the information.
Why would he do that? Is it abusable in some way?

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Could there be a modified version that does that?

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So, can this be used client-side without the server having it?

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Forum Games / Windows error generator
« on: January 20, 2016, 07:44:19 PM »
Hey guys, I randomly decided to look up "windows error generator."
I was not dissapointed.

Here's one I made (sorry if the joke is lame, I rushed this one):


Let's see you make your own.
Use puush or imgur, because if you directly hotlink the image you'll get this:

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Off Topic / Re: Bad/weird stuff you see on deviantArt - Megathread
« on: January 19, 2016, 06:34:05 PM »
-MENTAL SCARRING-

It's weird how special interest "art" manages to straddle the fine line between "arousing" and "absolutely horrifying" depending on the viewer.

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