The Rifle

[Jorge06]

My first model.

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[shafin25]

Make the front a bit of a sandish color and not like the point of a cannon. :D
Then make the scope a more grey-brown.
Then you're set.

[RFW2]

Not that bad, but compare it too heedicalking or someone.

[Celtic Wolf]

Could be a harpoon gun or a steampunk rifle.

[Zloff]

The textures make it look bad, but the colors are good.

[Jorge06]

Heres the untextured, it looks better to me.

[Pew446]

Too round :o

[takato14]

Too round :o

[Jorge06]

What shapes should I use?

[Junkie556]

not a rifle THE rifle

[blackferm]

Needs like, detail, as in like maybe cut some edges, or smooth some sides.

[Pew446]

What shapes should I use?

Make the barrel and the scope octagons

[takato14]

What shapes should I use?

Octagons for higher detail, hexagons for less detailed objects.

I would make the barrel and scope an octagonal prisim and bevel the edges on the stock.