Very good, upcoming BL movie creator perhaps? The first part was definitely the best, very nice eventing with the rock falling, it looked natural and I loved that part. You definitely should have re-filmed the scenes where the player names showed, it simply isn't professional to leave that in. I accidentally left player names on when filming certain scenes for Thereafter, the answer was simple-- I had to refilm. It would have been an absolute disaster if I hadn't and totally ruin the viewer engagement for such an error. Its not as serious in a short like this, but definitely makes the overall film feel of a lesser quality. But you have done a good job.
4/5