Need Feedback On My Adobe Illustrator Work

[Night Fox]

Changed the title. As for the "on" and "my" I believe that doesn't apply to subject headers.

No, it works the same as for a magazine, book, poem, or any such thing.
"On" and "my" are not capitalized.

[Ad Bot]

[Block Buster]

I like the general look of it but it seems like you messed up with the POV in the 3D. Like the fact that the roof is at more of a slanted angle but you have a bare building standing straight up in the background; or the way that the wall and door to the right just don't quite look angled correctly.