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[Eogan]

this is a song i have written please rate
*you are you are the one the one i love the one i always think about so please just hear me out*
i told you i would never give up but you just had to go and show me up why couldnt you have thought of me and held on to what we could be instead of ripping my soul free
*chorus*
 you know i would never hurt you so what is keeping you from me is it the fact that im only one in libe for you or is it that you are afraid of what people will think of us
 *chorus*
the one

[Ad Bot]

[Iban]

Sell it to Justin Beiber.
Make millions.

[Malestrom]

I have a better song. Lemme get on my iPod.

[IkeTheGeneric]

Well it's a song. Can't think of a specific number.

[Malestrom]

Blade of Destruction, Blade of Hope

Eyes blink
Hands move
Ears hear
Blades kill. 
My destiny is on the horizon
The truth is waiting at the end
Maybe I'll get a life and move on
Maybe I just need a friend!

Blade of Destruction
Kill them all
Blade of Destiny
Let it fall
Cover your eyes
Hide from the pain 
And maybe I'm possibly going insane

The water turns red
My eyes look away
Maybe I'm dead
Or maybe afraid
Then let those damn fools
Have the last laugh
Cuz destiny knows
Its only half
Of what I'll get
When I end
What I have

Blade of Destruction
Kill them all
Blade of Destiny
Let it fall
Cover your eyes
Hide from the pain 
And maybe I'm possibly going insane

So let me hear the story
Come, unplug your ears. 
It might get gory
But I'm always here. 
Let the ground rumble
Let me fight to the end
Cuz I'll just mumble
"I have a friend"

Maybe death
Isn't that bad
Cuz death is all
They really had
Everything that starts
Must end
Everybody needs 
A friend

Blade of Destruction
Kill them all
Blade of Destiny
Let it fall
Cover your eyes
Hide from the pain 
And maybe I'm possibly going insane

I wield the blade
The Blade of God
I close my eyes
This might be long. 

[AfterShock]

I give it a 6.
It's good, but I'm more into Rise Against then this type of music.  I guess my vote is based on my personal opinion.

[Eogan]

edit: a scale of 1 to 10

[kevin 51l]

It's not that great to me.
6/10.

edit: a scale of 1 to 10

Edit the main post and change the thread's name from there if you want it to stay.

[Eogan]

it is techno or thrash not sure i think im gonna go with techno

[Malestrom]

It's nice though  a solid 11.

[Anti-Block]

it is techno or thrash not sure i think im gonna go with techno

Whatever it is, it's cliche and boring.

[Funnelcakes]

Erm, 1-10, I'd give it a 3. I can't really understand it, put it more in a format like Malestrom did.

[Malestrom]

Mine is fabrulous 

[Funnelcakes]

Mine Some stuffhead's is fabrulous 

[Pulchritude]

This makes me feel... uncomfortable...