DeniedWhile the build shows some design and realism, it does lack a few factors:
- Too simple. The rooms are too much of one color, flat, and somewhat badly built.
- The exterior is also very simple and quite messy. Perhaps pattern to the windows and depth to the exterior walls?
- The roof. Also simple, but the main problem here is how you made it so that even though there is only one extending part, the roof now has two extending parts so that it slopes right into the wall.
Overall, there are many areas that need improvement; the skylight, the windows, the color schemes, the patterns, the elegance, and the shape of it. I recommend you practice and build up your skills for at least a few more months or so. Once you feel you are a big step up from now, call us again :)
Of course you are entitled to apply again sooner if you wish, I just wouldn't recommend it.[/list]
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