Author Topic: AoB Application - ShadowCity (Read 1455 times)

Tough · July 01, 2011, 12:58:08 AM

Here are the pictures for this application!

I hope you like it!

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Trifax · July 01, 2011, 01:25:36 AM

Excellent, I would say yes. I can tell you've look at the general building style of the clan and clearly get the feel for what kind of builds we do. Good layout on the interior, nice Tron arcade cabinet, and nice exterior building design. Could use a little more texture on the brown building, but I'm only saying that because I feel like I shouldn't say all positive things on this. It's actually great.

One thing to perhaps...mask...is the ceiling, especially what we see in the first picture.

indyjones · July 01, 2011, 11:41:21 AM

Can't tell what's going on.

viper30000 · July 01, 2011, 03:37:08 PM

Its nice, exteriors are pretty good but the interior is meh on most of the buildings.
Your build does have a very nice atmosphere though on the outside.

Jacky · July 01, 2011, 04:48:22 PM

Very nice job.

I would say yes, too. But of course I can't because I'm not the director.

Anyways what Trifax said pretty much sums my opinion up. Good job, and hope you get in.

Tough · July 01, 2011, 07:25:37 PM

Thank you all everyone, I sure hope I get in to!

Penguin/Person · July 03, 2011, 04:08:55 AM

What. The. forget? If this gets in then I'm gunna be pist cus that means I'm trying wayy to hard on my app lol

Remousamavi · July 06, 2011, 05:44:40 PM

Quote from: Penguin/Person on July 03, 2011, 04:08:55 AM

What. The. forget? If this gets in then I'm gunna be pist cus that means I'm trying wayy to hard on my app lol

Penguin, you really don't have to be so mean about it. If you don't like it, offer constructive criticism, tell us what you don't like.

dorkdotdan · July 06, 2011, 07:01:22 PM

For rooms, I'd suggest having the walls be x8 tall, Just makes this kind of thing more roomy and offers more room for detail. I'm not in AoB, But I'm saying from my own opinion.

SirLancelot7 · July 06, 2011, 07:08:31 PM

Quote from: dorkdotdan on July 06, 2011, 07:01:22 PM

For rooms, I'd suggest having the walls be x8 tall, Just makes this kind of thing more roomy and offers more room for detail. I'm not in AoB, But I'm saying from my own opinion.

I usually do x7 high..

The ceiling in first picture could be redone. I see four 1 by ? plates in a row which can easily be substitued for a 4 by whatever. Outside looks great. I would've liked a few more pictures..

Glædr · July 07, 2011, 11:30:12 PM

I would say no on this, mainly because it just doesn't fell as.... clean... as it should be, for example, the windows (interior-wise). And, as mentioned before, the ceilings seem like a pile of random bricks. The exterior also isn't very detailed, and seems repetitive on both of the main buildings. However, the rest of the interior for the main building looks REALLY nice. This was a tough choice for me.