Author Topic: What do you guys think about this story? -Pastebin'd- (Read 660 times)

Dnitro · July 11, 2011, 09:02:57 PM

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It's pretty complicated to explain, so i would suggest reading it.

Any constructive criticism would be appreciated.
Also if you want to see more I can continue the story.

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Dnitro · July 11, 2011, 11:16:48 PM

Due to the people on Pesterchum I pastebin'd it for your convenience

Unwritten Calender · July 11, 2011, 11:18:32 PM

convinced

Dnitro · July 11, 2011, 11:22:49 PM

Quote from: Unwritten Calender on July 11, 2011, 11:18:32 PM

convinced

used to the first thing in google chrome's mistake bar to be right :c

Kevin · July 12, 2011, 12:35:37 AM

It was alright, could have ended better.

soba · July 12, 2011, 02:31:32 AM

Please add more onto it, I'm facinated by it

Jetlok · July 12, 2011, 02:34:37 AM

I didn't get the ending.