Blockland - Immortal (part 2)

[Mocha Furrier]

It was hard to follow the story. If you were aiming for a pure action movie deprived of an anecdote, then you have accomplished just that. Try adding more of a narrative. 

Yea. After i released the part 2 i noticed that there would be like a wanted mafia boss in the building or something like that.

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[Mocha Furrier]

It was hard to follow the story. If you were aiming for a pure action movie deprived of an anecdote, then you have accomplished just that. Try adding more of a narrative.  

Sorry, I double posted...

[Mocha Furrier]

good job, i noticed that in one of the scenes of part one you can see the guys inventory. i liked it.

Haha, thanks. I noticed it too when i did watch it from youtube.

[Jerkface]

Flubbman also made some nice videos.  His actors made the most of every action though (for as much as a Blockhead can do at least).  Some of your scenes are a bit choppy.  An example would be how the guy misses with each punch, yet the enemy still dies.  Or, how the guy in the hall just stands there getting punched... then dies.

I think if the movements and scenes were fine-tuned, this would be enjoyable.

[Mocha Furrier]

Flubbman also made some nice videos.  His actors made the most of every action though (for as much as a Blockhead can do at least).  Some of your scenes are a bit choppy.  An example would be how the guy misses with each punch, yet the enemy still dies.  Or, how the guy in the hall just stands there getting punched... then dies.

I think if the movements and scenes were fine-tuned, this would be enjoyable.

Ok. I will improve everything.

[Dragonoid-X]

Nice Video actors need a little bit of guidance but all in all i would say 8/10 also what video software did you use?

[Mocha Furrier]

Nice Video actors need a little bit of guidance but all in all i would say 8/10 also what video software did you use?

Oh! I used Windows live movie maker. Its free and very very good and free (ad).

[Qazimoka]

Part 2 First Room=Matrix much?

[Mocha Furrier]

Part 2 First Room=Matrix much?

Yes. I toke the idea here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XX8Y5-BZLaM