My Castle

[JJX99]

This is my first castle tell me what you think of it!

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[uno_da_cat]

This is pretty bad. Even for a beginner.
1x1 bricks.
multiple useless valves.
countless useless fire emitters.
Nothing fits in.

[The Corporation]

This is pretty bad. Even for a beginner.
1x1 bricks.
multiple useless valves.
countless useless fire emitters.
Nothing fits in.

Agree.

[JJX99]

I will try and make it better by replacing the 1x1 bricks and by the way the fire emitters were there for an effect not just useless things.Also the valves are for turning the fountain on and off, also there's a vault that stores gold, and those levers turn on a alarm.           :cookieMonster:Thanks for commenting anyway

[Sleven]

By your use of CMs in the OP.. I would had guessed that this was a joke.

[Obliviongate20]

Well,My way of thinking this could be better is..
-Don't double layer using 5x bricks,Use bricks (Precisly nothing taller or wider then 1x.)
-Color to be more fitting,Use ramps.
-Put valves in a more secrete area,Color them differently.
-Use fire emitters inside,not on the wall.
-Torches should not be metal/stone,They should be wood.
-Fountain needs too be on either a 8x8F plate or a 16x16 Baseplate
-Don't use unoldo,its ugly.
-Alarms should be activated through toggleEventenabled,not 2 switches,Same with valves.
-"On" and "Off" should go,Replace it with something more fitting towards the area.
-Use bubbles,foam and less Water A for the fountain.
-Make the fountain more white other then gray,It just doesn't look good.

Well,Thats just my ideas on how your castle could look better.

[JJX99]

Well,My way of thinking this could be better is..
-Don't double layer using 5x bricks,Use bricks (Precisly nothing taller or wider then 1x.)
-Color to be more fitting,Use ramps.
-Put valves in a more secrete area,Color them differently.
-Use fire emitters inside,not on the wall.                                  ( JJX99) Sorry I'm A Noobie) I just got the game last night
-Torches should not be metal/stone,They should be wood.
-Fountain needs too be on either a 8x8F plate or a 16x16 Baseplate
-Don't use unoldo,its ugly.
-Alarms should be activated through toggleEventenabled,not 2 switches,Same with valves.
-"On" and "Off" should go,Replace it with something more fitting towards the area.
-Use bubbles,foam and less Water A for the fountain.                                           
-Make the fountain more white other then gray,It just doesn't look good.

Well,Thats just my ideas on how your castle could look better.

[JJX99]

By your use of CMs in the OP.. I would had guessed that this was a joke.

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I got the Game Last Night

[mattnett1]

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I got the Game Last Night

REALLY???

Meh...
Here is what should be done bro.
Less 1x1 bricks, LESS flames on the fence.
DONT USE unduldo, unless you really wanna.
On and off shouldn't be there.
use bubbles instead of tons of water A.


I like it for a first time castle.   I don't find castles ammusing but this is good for beginner.

[JJX99]

Thanks for the positive comment ( the first one )