Million Dollar Throw - FINAL COPY

[dorkdotdan]

I love how useful this forum is for criticism.

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[Flamecannon]

wait why is there a sign up thing
i thought if you buy 500$ of sportstuff items then you are automatically added to the drawing

[dorkdotdan]

wait why is there a sign up thing
i thought if you buy 500$ of sportstuff items then you are automatically added to the drawing

No, you actually had to sign up.

[Regulith]

My inner graphic designer is crying, so let's take this from the top:

• What is this even? A flyer? A poster?
• Either the name of the company or the name of the contest should be larger than the other.
• There's a white line originating from the background going through the tagline. Move the tagline or use another image. Or change the text color.
• "Can you make the throw" is a question, and should be punctuated as such unless otherwise specified by the person who gave this project.
• Unless this is going to be printed 3 times larger than it appears on my screen, it's going to be hard as hell to fit a name in that sign-up box.
• I can barely read that text in the bottom left corner.
• You spelled "Million" wrong at the bottom.
• It needs some sort of fine print. If this is a class project and just a mock-up, make something up.
• Why is there a football player throwing a ball from what appears to be the stands?
• If this is actually for something, make sure you're using uncopyrighted images. In fact, our graphic design teacher told us to use uncopyrighted images even with our projects, so you might want to do that anyway.