Short Story: Zombies - "How original!"

[Awdax]

I love to write. A while back, I had a dream surrounding the events of a zombie apocalypse. Some of it didn't make sense, there were a lot of plot holes. I decided to turn it into a story and fill in the blanks on the way. It would make good practice. I never got to finishing it, and I don't know when I will. So for now, I'm going to let you guys read what I have so far. It's not even half of what I planned to write, there is still a lot more to be done.

There is no definite back-story to how everything started. I was going to drop a few hints and clues throughout the story, but like I said - it's not finished so there is nothing yet.

Hope Rides Alone (Working Title) PDF - Download ~34 pages

Feel free to rate, leave some constructive criticism (in case I ever pick it up again) and all that other jazz.

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[Awdax]

Forty-three views, five downloads and no comments?

[RedGajin]

Eh, its was nothing too great but it wasn't bad. There were way to many sentence fragments and almost no detail put into anything. Word choice was pretty weak and at times I got confused about where the storyline went. Most of it was just weak dialogue with no flavor in it at all.

If I was to grade it I would have given you a B- at best.

[Awdax]

Thank you for the feedback, I'll work on that.