Gas Station Stick Up (Short Blockland Comedy)

[Ben Grapevine]

I accept negative feedback if you give me constructive criticism on how to make what you didn't like better. However, when you just said it wasn't funny and dis on the voice actors that's different. There's a different between feedback that is negative but supplies some good, and negative feedback that is only just to completely hate on the video.

I just didn't find it funny and I don't see why you need to get your panties in a bunch when a person gets critical of your work.

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[Kazami]

Make it more compact. A video like this could of been fit in to 45 seconds or a minute. And then, have it actually make sense and not just rely on llulz funny random. Having a bunch of completely unrelated things isn't funny, but actually setting up for a joke or series of jokes that make sense is.

And for the love of god stop inserting random audio and bad voice acting wherever you can.
 

Thanks for the constructive feed back. My two newest videos were just a way to show that I am not quitting Youtube because I haven't uploaded a video in about 8 months. Trust me, I won't make anymore of those pointless, non-plotted videos anymore.

[Kazami]

I just didn't find it funny and I don't see why you need to get your panties in a bunch when a person gets critical of your work.

I don't care about your about you feel about my video, I would just like to know why you didn't think it was funny is all. I just don't like it when people just say it wasn't funny.

[Ben Grapevine]

I don't care about your about you feel about my video, I would just like to know why you didn't think it was funny is all. I just don't like it when people just say it wasn't funny.

Birth control is a serious thing, with young teenagers robbing a gas station in need of condoms.  Trying to make that funny just doesn't work, in my opinion.  The voice acting was also terrible (I assume on purpose, but none-the-less it was horrid when it didn't need to be).  The random forklift was the only thing that could have potentially been funny, other than it had a terrible driver who couldn't drive in a straight line.

You also shouldn't say something as ignorant and immature as "I don't care about what you think because it isn't good in your eyes" (I fixed your terrible grammar).

Honestly I'd give it a 5/10 just for decent cinematic properties.

[Kazami]

Birth control is a serious thing, with young teenagers robbing a gas station in need of condoms.  Trying to make that funny just doesn't work, in my opinion.  The voice acting was also terrible (I assume on purpose, but none-the-less it was horrid when it didn't need to be).  The random forklift was the only thing that could have potentially been funny, other than it had a terrible driver who couldn't drive in a straight line.

You also shouldn't say something as ignorant and immature as "I don't care about what you think because it isn't good in your eyes" (I fixed your terrible grammar).

Honestly I'd give it a 5/10 just for decent cinematic properties.

See, that's better. And I don't have terrible grammar.

[Ben Grapevine]

See, that's better. And I don't have terrible grammar.

I don't care about your about you feel about my video, I would just like to know why you didn't think it was funny is all. I just don't like it when people just say it wasn't funny.

Grammar ^

Also Ben. You really didn't yell at me, but I am just saying you don't need to say it isn't funny to you.

Bad word choice ^

How could I have mad it better?

Spelling ^

pls just cut ur losses

[Kazami]

Ben, I hope you stick around to see me when I make good videos.

[Ben Grapevine]

Ben, I hope you stick around to see me when I make good videos.

I've been here for four years, why would I leave now?

[Aide33]

It's too long

[wound]

Ben is autistic.

[wound]

Grammar^

oh yeah lol that's not grammar, that's a bad wording of a sentance, why are you starting an argument over grammar anyway.

[Blockzillahead]

oh yeah lol that's not grammar, that's a bad wording of a sentance, why are you starting an argument over grammar anyway.

If I'm not mistaken spelling is part of Mechanics, not grammar.

[Ben Grapevine]

Ben is autistic.

You're just an idiot.

[Aware]

GAYEEEEE