Poem! (Actually happy!)

[Silreath]

     I recently wrote a poem for my beautiful and caretaking mother, Its a dedication to her. As always, rate x/10!

You have helped me the hardest of times
You led me through the dark days of sorrow
I carefully suggest these rhymes,
I promise sunshine on the morrow.

[Ad Bot]

[Mordius]

     I recently wrote a poem for my beautiful and caretaking mother, Its a dedication to her. As always, rate x/10!

You have helped me the hardest of times
You led me through the dark days of sorrow
I carefully suggest these rhymes,
I promise sunshine on the morrow.

Meter is off. Must've taken you two minutes lol

[Silreath]

Meter is off. Must've taken you two minutes lol

Yeah, Its for a book Im writing for school. Due tomorrow.

[SWAT One]

Yeah, definitely need to fix the meter.

May I suggest?

You've helped me through the hardest of times
You led me through the days of sorrow
I carefully invoke these delicate rhymes,
I promise sunshine on the morrow.