I wrote a story

[hodototman]

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Void_Contract

Could I get some feedback here?

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[Wynd_Fox]

The narrator has a strange way of talking.

[Silreath]

It was Awesome and creepy but, the narrator is all "Come, my son." And "Hurry, my child. We must make haste."

Not exact quotes but, yknow...

Yeah.

[hodototman]

The narrator has a strange way of talking.

This is how I write. Also, he was an older gentleman.

maybe he's in the UK idk

[Jairo]

This is how I write. Also, he was an older gentleman.

maybe he's in the UK idk

elderly uk people don't talk like that

[hodototman]

elderly uk people don't talk like that

some do

[Jairo]

some do

no, they don't