For part of my English final exam, I had to write a radio advertisement, and I chose the topic muck boots.
Title: Joe's Muck boots
Type: Radio advertisement
Time:
Announcer - Hey parents, are you tired of your kids getting their brand new pair of overpriced $120 shoes dirty? Try Joe's Muck boots! Keep them in the garage, and they can slide them on before they jump in the mud like little piglets.
Parent -*enthusiasm* Joe's Muck boots are great! I can't afford football cleats for my son, but with Joe's Muck boots, they only cost $19.99, and are on sale right now for $13.00! all the kids will be jealous when he's getting touchdowns with Muck boots!
Announcer - Joe's Muck boots are on Main Street near Pizza Hut. Or call 1800-blah-blah, and get a second pair of Muck boots for $8.99!
Any thoughts on writing improvements? Or rate it, sure.