Made me laugh a few times, good job!
It did drag on a little bit though, if it's mostly just going to be dialogue then you're going to want to make sure that you cut out the unneeded/uninteresting parts to keep that from happening. The title also appeared kind of late into the video, it probably would have been better to have it before the first scene
Oh and you forgot to add the links to the videos in the end, lol
