Charlie's Sports Bar - 2

[TheReventon]

Description
This is the new and improved version of Charlie's Sports Bar. This time I took the advice of my commenters and made this.
Comparisons *(old); (new)*
Size: 32x64, 1 room; 64x64, 1 room
TV's: 1; 12
Exterior: stuffty as forget; I personally think bricks beat ramps any day
Tables: 2x w/ stilt legs(4x16); 6x w/ modern-styled ramp legs (4 4x16, 2 4x12)
Decor: none at all; posters next to TV's, balls in glass cases on tables, 2 basketball decals on floor
Lights: skylight; skylight, 16 fluorescent lights on ceiling

Pics
Exterior

Exterior (side view)

Interior



Enjoy and please rate x/10!

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[Renousim]

first was better and please dont use the bricks for exterior, they are ugly

[TheReventon]

first was better and please dont use the bricks for exterior, they are ugly

looking at them in the pic now i actually have to say i agree with you that they do look pretty ugly

[Theepicman]

Wtf why would there be 4 TV's together. That'll confuse viewers. Add some bots too to make it feel like there's something there. Add some chairs at the table. You dont see that much people eating without chairs. The exterior is slightly improved but you can add some bathrooms so you dont have to piss outside and stuff on the tables. If your confused about your view I'll make a chart
NEGATIVES

• No chairs at the tables
• No bathrooms (Where do you stuff and piss?)
• TV's very close together (Wouldn't that confuse the people watching the TV?)
• No bots to make it feel like theres something there.
• No parking lot
• No night version
• No food of any kind (Pretty sure sports bars have food)
• No kitchen to cook the food if there was any food
  

What I'm saying is that you can improve this by a longshot if you fix the negatives and turn them into positives. Now for the positives.
POSITIVIES

• Added basketball art to the floor (I like it!)
• More TVS (The last one had only 1)
• You added some sports balls in glass onto the tables (Adds some decoration to the tables)
• Removed the horrid exterior ramps and put brick textures as exterior walls
• The hardwood floor looks almost the same as the first one but seems like its better than the first one

You can see that there are more negatives than positives because the negatives were VERY obvious. Anyone could spot them. As I said, you can improve this by a longshot by fixing the negatives and turning them into positives.

I'll give it a 6/10. Needs some work.

[joe44]

Look decent.

[TheReventon]

Wtf why would there be 4 TV's together.

I've seen 6 adjacent TV's before in a 2x3 configuration.

Add some bots too to make it feel like there's something there.

look at page 2 or 3 of the other one...i explain why i didnt put bots

• No chairs at the tables
• No bathrooms (Where do you stuff and piss?)
• TV's very close together (Wouldn't that confuse the people watching the TV?)
• No bots to make it feel like theres something there.
• No parking lot
• No night version
• No food of any kind (Pretty sure sports bars have food)
• No kitchen to cook the food if there was any food
  

• I am modeling the tables' concept from a bar my dad goes to all the time. You stand around it instead of sitting
• This isnt a model for IRL uses, this is for BL where the people dont even have genetalia or a-holes
• Explained that earlier
• Explained that earlier too
• Missed that, I'll add it in the next version
• Imma quote my main man Future here..."Turn on the lights!"...look on the ceiling bro
• mine doesnt, as do some of the sports bars around where I live
• ^

Look decent.

Gracias

[hodot]

Try to do something new with the corners on the exterior? Maybe it's just me but the exterior is just flat and bland. You could also maybe put up a few fake stores next to it to look like a chain of stores.

[TheReventon]

Try to do something new with the corners on the exterior? Maybe it's just me but the exterior is just flat and bland. You could also maybe put up a few fake stores next to it to look like a chain of stores.

K