Author Topic: Test Subject #10202456 - Chapter 1 finished! for the time being...  (Read 2490 times)

unless densitron shows up later in the story and does something there's not really any point to explain the game mechanics
yeah I edited that section out, the new chapter 1's coming soon

so this is just chronicle but in the future? Why?
my story's going to be radically different than what that movie is, so no

In response to the two comments I got from Cassord, both of those sections are going to be removed anyway because I was working on a better version of Ch. 1's ending.

Quick update, Chapter 1's taking a long while to be revised because it turns out that I had a much better idea for how it was going to play out, so I had to remove and retcon a bunch of stuff.

If you guys want, here's the link to what I have so far.
« Last Edit: February 11, 2015, 11:49:46 PM by Zanaran2 »

I got off my butt and finished chapter 1! Check it out now!


Where be da women? Hmmm???


so far I introduced like 2 wimminz, be paciento
« Last Edit: February 14, 2015, 02:55:33 PM by Zanaran2 »