I've never been a big fan of like random amorphous looking windows like those, I mean they kinda look better on the inside but the exterior is odd because of the varying amount of detail on the walls and such. If instead you put those kinds of window designs on like a Japanese-esque wall screen I think it'd be cooler.
The interior is spot on though, like I love that little toilet towel paper spool thing I don't know what you call them. Kinda looks a bit weird to put a TV in front of a fireplace like that. All in all I think the exterior is a bit plain and could use some work, and the interior can use a bit more organizing with its furniture, but it's neat regardless as there is definitely a sense of creativity into parts of the build and I'd like to see more in the future. Looks like you also built it on a City RP or something? I can imagine that's why you couldn't get more shots such as like overhead and such?