Landscape Like Thing (S Clan Application)

[Sword99]

I Was making this to join the S Clan. Its basily this little landscape place I Made that has the following:

2 Cabins
Mountains
Wild Horses
A Small Forrest
A River stream

Here are the Pictures.

Inside the Cabin


Another one inside the same cabin


Outside of the cabbin (Fireplace and seats)


Two horses and a mountain with the river infront


Far shot of mountains and river


The Forrest (Looks better when your in it, not above it)


Sky Shot of everything (Shows a little of both Cabins in here)



I Hope this turns out well :)

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[cucumberdude]

Meh. I don't like it. Forest is too square and perfect, use of default trees. Not very much detail.

[xXFlareXx]

Try adding some brown in there for dirt and add some rocks or stones.

[Ryuu]

I don't like it all that much. Trees could of been better. There not hard to mkae.Cabins needs more room filld up.

[Plateau]

Looks ok but dont use default trees next time and the cabins are meh

[Jaxx]

The persnickety part of me saw the poles in the cabins and said, "Those would catch the whole thing on fire."
On-Topic: The trees could be a bit more varied, and the forest needs detail, but other than that, it looks like its coming along nicely.

[Blockoman]

Trees are too columny. Add some rocks/ brown dirt and then you'll be fine.

[ryanb31394]

I don't like the mountains, they are too blocko....

[Molasses]

Don't overuse fire. Make less default trees. Less blocko. Pretty much what everyone else said.