Author Topic: blue jay's  (Read 517 times)

blue jays

man there is now a new clan that is actually a gang  i hope its good
 only want 12 members

weapons: uzi,ak47,bat,m4a1

member list:

leader: lalo505
driver: N/A
scripter: N/A
1st body gaurd: N/A
2nd body gaurd: N/A
dezigner: N/A
spy: N/A
spy 2: N/A
builder: N/A
painter: N/A
2nd drive by window: N/A
face designer: N/A


if you join you get protection from any other clan like this
« Last Edit: May 25, 2009, 03:06:56 PM by lalo505 »

You need more info. And fast.



No.

I'm going to post what this topic needs. You need to fix it. Really.

  • Ideas divided into paragraphs.
  • Headers.
  • Information regarding how to apply, or what is needed to join otherwise.
  • A logo of some sort, of even your clan's name at a large size, in a nice font.
  • A list of members. Make sure you have a few members before posting a clan topic.
  • Detailed description of what your clan is all about.
  • Good grammar and spelling.

A few tips, specifically for this clan.

  • Your title is too long. I suggest changing it to "Blue Jays".
  • Your first sentence doesn't make sense.
  • Gangs clans don't usually turn out good here.
  • You just said "wepon".
  • You need an epic fix to your grammar. "Here weapon you use if join" is really mangled English.

Now, I suggest you fix it. We don't need any more sentence-long clan topics here.


how you add pics



photobucket.com.

Upload your pictures, then post the [IMG] code that comes up when you hover over a picture.

Well you added more, Ill join in as the Builder slot.

Well you added more, Ill join in as the Builder slot.
i'll join as the...
driver, body guards 1 and 2, builder, painter, "dezigner", and eventer if he adds it, and i would be able to do all of these at once at easily...