The cafe looks very awkward, like the colors are just random and the bricks and designs are there for no reason. It's all just one big mess. Try putting a few main colors and designs.
This is pretty much why it didn't get him in NWB for those who are acting surprised.
-the clan is about building NEW things, like you used a NEW building style
There is a difference between unique and unusual.
Nonetheless, this isn't a NWB app anymore, so there is no reason to discuss it further. I'm just explaining for those who think this should have gotten him in.