You are being arrogant Liam. Relize that you won't get in with this no matter how you change it. The basic structure is the same.
To backup my previous arguements,
I don't really like the trees and the interior and exterior could be better. The interior also seems a bit empty. The house itself is also a bit small.
As you should be able to see, i redid the interior, added much to the interior and doubled the house in size.
I say it should be 3 stories high!

Although it's not 3 stories tall, I did make it bigger.
The whole house is one two rooms? Make some walls. Make a garage. I want more.
Added walls, a boat and much more.
I don't think the interior is that well done. You could fix up some furniture and maybe use bricks to make things instead of using props. (I think that actually shows how well you build) The kitchen looks a bit empty and could be filled up. I also think that you should fix up your couch. It looks kind of bad.
I like your exterior a lot and don't think it needs any fixing except for maybe adding in a backyard. Nice work on it though I really like it.
Generally added a backyard and a porch, fixed most interior.
If this isn't enough to prove my point then I don't even know how to app for a Clan.