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this is one of my worst stories. type X/10 if you would like


A Boy That Wished I Wish I Was President
Part 1

           One day there was a normal president, a normal boy named Josh, a vice president named Susie. Joshes friends Jake and Tonya. One night josh saw a shooting star and wished “I wish I could be the president.” suddenly the area around him started spiraling and swished into a big blob then reformed and suddenly the josh was the president! He thought what am I doing in the presidents chair? Suddenly the secretary walked in with a top secret file it even said top secret the secretary said I want you to read this the josh asked “what is it?” the secretary said “it is about an alien sighting.” josh said “oh I will read it later.” the lady said “ok.” then joshes friends Jake and Tonya walked in. Jake was one of those kids that have a piece of toast for a brain. Jake asked ooohhh a big red button then josh remodeled the white house into the golden bling house! Then later the secretary walked back in and said “did you read the secret file?” josh said “well I kind of forgot.” the secretary said “then read it.” but the boy was quite lazy and said “I will call the vice president to read it for me.” the secretary said “well ok.” the secretary called the vice president then a little girl walked in josh yelled “WHA!!!!” and said “that is so not the vice president!” the secretary said “you made her the vice president so you could boss her around without no talk back.” josh said “oooohhhh ok.” and josh told the vice president to read the file. She said “ok Mr. president.” then she walked away with the file. Then josh walked into the gift shop wile the real president was leading everyone through the gift shop. Josh and the real president talked for a while then the vice president walked in and said “hi daddy!” to the real president. Then they chatted for a while then the vice president walked over to josh and gave him the intro on the folder/ she said “the aliens are magnetic they have rays to turn humans into magnetic robots to!” then suddenly a dark blue ray hit the general and made him a magnetic robot then another one hit the real president and turned him into a magnetic robot to! “Oh no!” the vice president and josh said. Then the started running away and then more robots witch happen to be the customers chased them! They ran into the presidents office then when they turned around all the robots were already in and circled them josh said “wow how did they get in here so fast!” then the vice president suddenly acting like a robot josh said “oh not you to!” then the vice president said “no they didn’t get me but I control them.” josh said “WHAT!!!!” the vice president said “yep I do.” then yelled “STOP!” then the robots froze in there track. Then the vice president said “yeah I control them and I say capture him robots!!” then josh ran under the desk and got back up and saw the button on the desk and opened it the vice president yelled “STOP HIM!” then josh pressed it then suddenly a background sound said “UNDOING ,UNDOING ,UNDOING ,UNDOING” then everything swirled and turned into a blob and reformed right where he was when he made the wish. Then he saw the shooting star again and wished “I wish that no magnetic robots will take over the world.”


there it is you may vote X/10 if you want.
« Last Edit: March 18, 2010, 07:48:41 PM by joe hb »

if you want i can put part 2


yay someone voted X/10 :D

Poll is an example of how NOT to have your poll set up.
My brain exploded after "golden bling house".



This isn't your story. This was a episode on a show. Nice try.

It's terribly written anyways.

This isn't your story. This was a episode on a show. Nice try.

I caught that at "The real president was leading tourists through the gift shop"

Magnetic aliens had magnetic guns to turn humans into magnetic robots? Well, this is such an epic proportion.

This isn't your story. This was a episode on a show. Nice try.
it is mine besides i have part two and my real name is john OK i hate my real name. everyone hates my real name.

i wrote it when i was in third grade ok -_- i hate myself for trying to show something i wrote. everyone hates me for trying to wright my own story. -_- i guess i will lock topic now

Bullstuff. You couldn't even write this now. I've seen a show on TV with an episode with this exact plot. Coincidence? I think not
This isn't your story. This was a episode on a show. Nice try.

A topic in creativity that has absolutely 0 creativity in it?
It's more likely than you think.