Colleagues Application | Apartment | 2nd App | WIP |

[Tanek]

I'm Sentinel
So Here's My 2nd Application
Brickcount (no roads) = 6503
Brickcount (With Roads) = 18547
It's start of a town
Type = Apartment
Fully Evented
almost Fully Furnished
Here Are the pictures
Bigger
Better Roof

Front


Side


Side


Apartment


Apartment


Apartment


Apartment


Birds Eye View


Please Rate 0 - 10
Do Not Say Yes or no if you are not a Colleagues Member.
Thanks
I hope i get through this time

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[Lalam24]

I feel like you just duplicated a certain building style, as opposed to gaving it your own little flush.  And that really would've been the only benefit, the build itself is rather... plain.

I'm going to have to say no.  It was almost a hesitant yes, but I don't see you gaining as much experience in the clan, as you would outside of it.

[Tanek]

i don't belive you have a right to vote as you only JUST joined the clan...

[Lalam24]

I've asked several members, and they've said that I can.  Just joining doesn't imply voting status in C.

Also,

• Your application will be judged by the members of C. Majority rules.

[Barnabas]

To be honest, the "ziggurat-style" does not work very well on this. Lalam's critique was valid, this feels like having yesterday's lunch for dinner.
It's a no from me, sorry.

[Azazel]

I do think you have potential, but you need to be patient, hang around the server more, and try some other styles before I would reconsider my decision.

It's a no from me as well.

[Soviet]

I think you should try a different approach on an application, this is very similar to the style of your previous one.

[BrockCrock135]

Make it less Symmetrical, and Try getting some Reference pics/PLan it out.

[Conan]

I like it, but as others said, too symmetrical.


Why not do a style where you have one side elevated over the other?