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[Episode 2: Season 1] - Blocko Spies "Back in the Eighties" part 1 

Blocko Spies - Back in the Eighties
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Buugi Groovie is an afro-dude who want to return the Eighties. With hes time traveler he can bring any person back to the history of Los Angeles. Will the Spies can get out of the Eighties, while Buugi takes WOOBP over?

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It's still bloody horrible.

Here are your problems, non-storyline related:

You're still on a bad map.
Subtitles are ugly and block the screen, they have multiple spelling / grammatical errors and they disappear too fast. "Mac didn't told us that he move from building."
Music is not really good for a spy movie. I mean, Arabian-style music when they go to the 80's? What?

Storyline-related issues:

These spies are loving handicapped. There's barely any "spying" involved, they just jump into the action.
At one point someone says "Let's go see what they're doing" and another says "Great plan!!" HURRlovingDURR.
People are disappearing! It must be a time traveler! After all, it's not like some random people of LA could ever lie or anything.
There's barely any talking or planning involved. Sure, you don't want to make it boring, but it's like "lolol lets go" is their genius plan.

Those are the main ones. I'd recommend you turn this into a parody/farce kind of series because you wouldn't have to change very much.

Thank you and have a nice day.