The Zero. Me no speak english. :D

[goobler402]

Tom Green :/

I'm on it.

Ha!

Seriousness: I just read the story for the first time without looking for errors, and the "proglue" isn't a real prologue. Your prologue is basically chapter 1. Real prologues aren't continued immediately by the first chapter, they are usually cut off, or relate to the main story in an indirect way.

This was a joke topic.
It was meant to make everyone say, "What the hell?"

Don't fret, the story is still in the making.

[Ad Bot]

[Dippindots]

I wouldn't call what i'm doing fretting ;)

[goobler402]

I'm still brainstorming the actual story.

Hmm, I wonder.

[Dippindots]

Perhaps you should have a general idea of what will happen before you start posting/writing.

[goobler402]

Perhaps you should have a general idea of what will happen before you start posting/writing.

I do, though, but I need ideas on what should revolve on the main plot.

[Deus Ex]

My eyes. MY EYES, they can't unsee the horrible errors.
THEY'RE EVERYWHERE!