Mobile Game Slab

[Jay the Cartoonist]

So in Cartoon Animation class for our final project we all had to make a commercial for this bulky mobile game system called the "Mobile Game Slab"
We had an entire program based around this thing kind of guiding us through how to use flash with this cheesy story of us working for this game company to create a commercial.  It gave us a page about the mobile game slab and all of it's features, this is where I got almost all of it's features from, of course 

This is my first real animation in flash, I've done other small tests and stuff but this is my real first project.

Here it is:

Click for vid ^^^

Feedback would be nice, I already know the voice overs are awful. Neither the schools or my mics were very good so I did the best with what I had. Also had a time limit to do this.

Thanks to reaper for being such a great game and drak for making such great cover art for said game.

[Ad Bot]

[Korabar]

It's creative, mostly the reason I like it.
For some reason, I lol'd at him in space.

[TechnoPop]

Like, Reaper.

[Menen]

Needs more menen

but noice work

and it needs explosions

[Drak]

reaper is best game

[reaper]

my dreams of eing in a video game is finaly come true
:') i would liket o thank my mom
and my dad my dog (dead) and satan god

[The Corporation]

Nice.
Though if possible, might want to have someone clear the audio up if possible.

[Jay the Cartoonist]

Nice.
Though if possible, might want to have someone clear the audio up if possible.

I cleared as much as I could in Audacity, halfway through we used another mic and yeah
I am not great with audacity, i could only figure out how to remove the room's tone.

[keonesan]

Nice. But why do I think I've seen this animation style befor-

Oh that's why.

Anyways good job. What program do you use? Adobe Flash? Macromedia?

[Jay the Cartoonist]

Nice. But why do I think I've seen this animation style befor-

Oh that's why.

Anyways good job. What program do you use? Adobe Flash? Macromedia?

Yeah I thought C+H Characters would be easiest to draw and animate :3

Adobe Flash is what we used

[NickTheSushi]

Can you put it on youtube? Newgrounds is a cigarette and won't work for me :\