Author Topic: [OWB] Application - Mideval Cottage  (Read 696 times)

Heres a mideval cottage I made to app for OWB, it seemed like a good clan and it was getting constant apps, so I thought id try also, here are some pictures:

Exterior Veiw:



Bed:



Fireplace:



Table:



Overall interior veiw:



Tree:




Outhouse:




Can we rate/criticize?

Shard, no offense, but your far from app'ing. Considering how I've seen you build.

Yeah, you can rate /x10, constructive critism only please. Anyways Derrioth, you mean I have a too low building skill or too high?


... Anyway I can improve?

Okay, I'd rate it about 4/10.

What I have to say:

-The tree looks pretty bad. You might want to look at some other blockland trees for inspiration, as that doesn't quite look like one.

-The interior is extremely dull and boring. It needs some more stuff in it.

-I think you can go without the outhouse IMO

That is all.

That's the weirdest tree I've seen. The outhouse uses the wrong design, it's suppose to be all wood. The cottage itself is sub-par quality. So I am going to say no but keep trying as many times as you like.

Shard, add that to the post, I rate 3/10. Here's a quick format, each one is out of three.
Detail;1 (Dull, and boring)
Creativity;2 (Idea is plain, but there's not too much in the medieval times)
Planned;1 (Looks like it was freestyled very quickly)

Sorry but I must say No as well.

The tree design is extremely strange to begin with. Exterior design is very repetitive and the interior and exterior are lacking a large amount of detail.

Locking becuase already got my results, but ill try again and put more effort into it, I knew the tree design was weird to begin with.