[AoB] Clan application. (Bank Of AJcW) (IMG Heavy)

[AJCW]

Here's My Bank i've been Workin on, i Finally Got off Xbox and made this, So [AoB] I hope you like it, I haven't Been Apping for clans lately so Im a Bit Rusty.    A Hard day in the city.(Focus on bank, Not Background)Another View.
A Close Up. The ATM Machine. The Interior.The Interior (2nd Veiw.) Another Outside Veiw. Night Veiw. OK, well, I'm excepting constructive Criticism That's Not too Harsh, also, [AoB] Members  Vote Please. also, im accepting ideas to make it better, i will work hard to Make it into [AoB]. ALSO: my spring break is ending...

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[Penguin/Person]

So ACJW, what made you decide to put the asscrack inside the building instead of outside?

[AJCW]

So ACJW, what made you decide to put the asscrack inside the building instead of outside?

I'm Sorry, What?

[viper30000]

He's referring to the fifth picture but just ignore him, he's being stupid. Its very nice and I especially love the outer walls. Great style and good detail.

[Sleven]

Well, this is pretty horrible.
It is missing common sense.
Doesn't reefer anything to an irl bank. Have you ever been to a bank?

Futuristic outside with too much use of arches and ramps in overall.
No real inside, use wallpapers from now on!

You was asking for ideas to make it better.. but I say, ditch the whole build and try to maybe.. gather inspiration from a local bank. Or google it.

Also, Banks is usually not located in a park, or whatever that surrounding is..
..Now when I think about it, skyscrapers usually don't stand on grass either...

It isn't such a bad build. But it doesn't look attractive.

[Trifax]

The inside is the same as the outside, and it's a general rule I believe that insides should have a different walling than the outside (which, as Sleven said kinda is too futuristic with too many ramps).

Personally I think it's too jumbled up. Like you tried too hard to vary everything and not make it look the same. The buildings in the back are pretty nice I guess, but we didn't really get a closer look at 'em.

[Monkeyboy]

1) I have yet to see a bank in such a location...
2) Banks don't generally look so much like props for action figures
3) Bit heavy on the arches
4) Basically exactly what Sleven said

[Remousamavi]

Denied

I'm afraid this is not AoB quality.

• The exterior is somewhat lapse in details, and there is very little interior. I did not see a picture of the interior of those offices, but I can assume they are what they look like from outside?
  
  
• The bank does not look like much like a bank, and is rather small for a bank. It also has few of what you would expect from a bank.
  
  
• The location and landscaping are terrible. The parking lot, for one thing, is poorly done, and the buildings in the background are poorly positioned.
  
  

I recommend you practice on building something with more detail, realism, and venue than I see in this build. Better luck next time!

[AJCW]

Thanks Everybody, i was having a Hard time figuring out what to make, And i just went with it, in turn was a  bad idea... thnx for your comments and i'll put them into some future apps for other clans, and also, i'd like to know if you guys limit to 1 app? because... (Not trying to make up excuses) i was a bit tired and didn't plan ahead, AGAIN: i wasn't sure to begin with what it would even be, witch is a mistake, I'll get better though, and that's what this is all about, getting comments, and i'm grateful for that. Thnx. If you guys don't have a 1 app limit i'd like to try again, i wasn't too confident about that and was eager to post...

[lilboarder32]

I'm curious as to why you capitalize random words, and don't others, even when they should be capitalized. Not in a judgmental way, just curious.

[Trifax]

I'm curious as to why you capitalize random words, and don't others, even when they should be capitalized. Not in a judgmental way, just curious.

[Remousamavi]

Thanks Everybody, i was having a Hard time figuring out what to make, And i just went with it, in turn was a  bad idea... thnx for your comments and i'll put them into some future apps for other clans, and also, i'd like to know if you guys limit to 1 app? because... (Not trying to make up excuses) i was a bit tired and didn't plan ahead, AGAIN: i wasn't sure to begin with what it would even be, witch is a mistake, I'll get better though, and that's what this is all about, getting comments, and i'm grateful for that. Thnx. If you guys don't have a 1 app limit i'd like to try again, i wasn't too confident about that and was eager to post...

You may apply as many times as you wish. Learn from your mistakes, improve over time.

[AJCW]

Bad habit, Sorry, aww damn i caught my self.

You may apply as many times as you wish. Learn from your mistakes, improve over time.

Ok, thank you, got any ideas? or are you not aloud to tell me?Nevermind, im making a House based on a blue print offline, im trying to work on the typing habit :P

[Barakuda]

I think you should fire that guy at the desk. He doesn't look very good.

[AJCW]

I think you should fire that guy at the desk. He doesn't look very good.

Will do. "Johnny your fired!"ok, it's done. :D