There are
many things wrong with this video. However, they can (hopefully) all be fixed.
First off, the graphics of this video are not ideal. I suggest you watch
this for help on quality of the video. Also, just tweak some of advanced options in BL, etc.
The lighting is very...not so good. I would suggest instead of using lighting from ingame, use lighting in Sony Vegas such as bump map, or light rays.
With the Seven Months have gone by thing, I noticed that some of the letters were chopped off. Simply go to the crop event and make Maintain Aspect Ratio from
YES to
NOThe acting was kinda bad, with them getting shot and slowly falling. Use your imagination to make that look better.
Also, what Unwritten Calender said about the text, etc.
The audio can be fixed, or just taken out and custom audio put in.
Hope this helped.