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[Removed bacause I decided it sucked]
« Last Edit: August 19, 2011, 08:06:22 PM by Blockster20080 »

Drink booze, you lose.
Creativity?
Also, I think the ending should be more creative. Like an unveiling of the stranger.
« Last Edit: August 18, 2011, 06:38:16 PM by Unwritten Calender »

GOG THAS STORY RNT NOT REEL S0 T SUK -9999999999999999/10



Jk, you write a better story than I do :o 6/10 for alright story

Drink booze, you lose.
Creativity?
Also, I think the ending should be more creative. Like an unveiling of the stranger.
obviously Slenderman.  :cookieMonster:



I give it a 6/10, also. It's alright, didn't really scare me though.