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Author Topic: Im writing a fictional war story (deleted, was too bad)  (Read 273 times)

HelplessNobb88

September 19, 2011, 11:55:55 PM
Okay, it was mediocre. Sorry. Will rewrite.
« Last Edit: September 20, 2011, 12:01:25 AM by HelplessNobb88 »

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Wafflajizzles

September 19, 2011, 11:58:48 PM
A few spelling errors. Too much battle and cool explosions makes for a terrible story. There is SOME good figurative language. Also, this belongs in creativity.
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