Author Topic: I just started writing my chapter :D  (Read 767 times)

So I had a writer's block for months. I had grown to love writing stories since seventh grade but I suddenly stopped. So anyway, I started making character studies but I was still stuck. First, ill tell you my story. It is about a teenage boy who despises everything and is a very arrogant and hot tempered person. As he grows older he realizes his personality and starts changing.

So sacred came up with a clever idea: why not let the forumers help you? I made this death topic to see if any forumer thinks the way he does so I can phrase what he contemplates. Alas, some became a bit too smart mouthed and started insulting me. I turned it to a positive thing. My writer's block has stopped and I became him. I might even posts some scenes.

Discuss your obstacles and how you use people to solve them :3

make him rape girls
put details like
"He shot all over her tender deliciously lovey face. Her not minding, slowly rubbed it onto her long lovey fingers and licked her fingers"

make him rape girls
put details like
"He shot all over her tender deliciously lovey face. Her not minding, slowly rubbed it onto her long lovey fingers and licked her fingers"
are you bloody kidding me

oh god lol

no, that isnt a very good topic i do not think

make him rape girls
put details like
"He shot all over her tender deliciously lovey face. Her not minding, slowly rubbed it onto her long lovey fingers and licked her fingers"
That's....



The most brilliant idea ever. I'm not using that, though. You should make a story about a guy and his lovey life.

That's....



The most brilliant idea ever. I'm not using that, though. You should make a story about a guy and his lovey life.
or make him kill people
use details.
"He took the long sharp knife from the desk. He turned to his tied victim, which was crying from the fear. "Please, i'll do anything! Let me go! Please! My wife is about to have a child!" He kicked his victim down. "You loving deadbeat motherforgeter, you should have loving thought of that when you took my loving animal crackers" He trusted the sharp object straight down his throat. The sounds of him chocking from the blood and knife gave the boy a pleasant smile. He pulled the knife out thrusting it into his chest, turning it slowly."

a shock of pain just went through my neck

or make him kill people
use details.
"He took the long sharp knife from the desk. He turned to his tied victim, which was crying from the fear. "Please, i'll do anything! Let me go! Please! My wife is about to have a child!" He kicked his victim down. "You loving deadbeat motherforgeter, you should have loving thought of that when you took my loving animal crackers" He trusted the sharp object straight down his throat. The sounds of him chocking from the blood and knife gave the boy a pleasant smile. He pulled the knife out thrusting it into his chest, turning it slowly."
Very yes

or make him kill people
use details.
"He took the long sharp knife from the desk. He turned to his tied victim, which was crying from the fear. "Please, i'll do anything! Let me go! Please! My wife is about to have a child!" He kicked his victim down. "You loving deadbeat motherforgeter, you should have loving thought of that when you took my loving animal crackers" He trusted the sharp object straight down his throat. The sounds of him chocking from the blood and knife gave the boy a pleasant smile. He pulled the knife out thrusting it into his chest, turning it slowly."
I hysterically laugh. Geezus! Why do I have such a bloody humor?

Very yes
or you can combine the both.
"as he ejected the knife, he started noticed how juicy and tender the open wound he made was, removing his bottom clothing article t-"

i really don't want to write this.

or make him kill people
use details.
"He took the long sharp knife from the desk. He turned to his tied victim, which was crying from the fear. "Please, i'll do anything! Let me go! Please! My wife is about to have a child!" He kicked his victim down. "You loving deadbeat motherforgeter, you should have loving thought of that when you took my loving animal crackers" He trusted the sharp object straight down his throat. The sounds of him chocking from the blood and knife gave the boy a pleasant smile. He pulled the knife out thrusting it into his chest, turning it slowly."
make him kill people with love
"At his release down her throat, she instantly started choking from all the semen invading her insides. Slowly losing the ability to breathe, her mouth was held closed by her rapist, so she couldn't spit out his sticky liquid. She died that night with a man's most personal fluids lodged in her throat."

wait you beat me to it :c



im sorry
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