This looks good but there are things you need work on.
- Less choppy filming. This is the defining line between average and Eksi-type. The filming type at the beginning though fit, as it defined the idea of someone surviving the crash and climbing up the wreckage, rather than a camera filming the debris.
- Shorter action scenes. Normally when using other media they end up usually too short, but blockland videos have a tendency to overstretch scenes and create boredom. The first scene(s) can be long but don't make every one after that as long.
- Vehicles. Don't just spawn them in place, drive them there. It makes a difference.
- Effects. The last part with the window had effects that dragged on too long. It's good for the first flash, but revert back to normal footage after that. However your emitter effects on the plane was good.
- Text. The font didn't really fit in all that well and were placed in the exact same spot. It would have been better if you moved it around, putting it in different places where it would show better. Still, stick with the same font after using it once.
- Timeline. It isn't very clear how the cars and city fit in. Is it the crash site or where the plane took off?
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