My song about Amnesia: The Dark Descent

[VerticalHorizon]

It's pointless to post anything in Creativity because no one will look at it, so I'm putting it here.

It's metal so if you can't handle growling/screaming, don't complain because I warned you.

http://www.mediafire.com/?swk9nbhnskz8lkk

Lyrics:

Trapped in stone corridors
Flickering dissonant light
Guiding me to the inner sanctum
The walls are breathing slowly
As the sounds grow louder
One by one my thoughts are vanquished by the darkness
Shadows passing by in the distance
Sanity slowly fading away
Fingers going numb
Senses failing me now
I must find him before they find me

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[ShadowsfeaR]

Aw you didn't send it to me first.

Amazing work none the less. \m/

[Anti-Block]

all i could think about when listening to it

[ShadowsfeaR]

A square?

[Anti-Block]

no, that face.

[Kevin]

A square?

The image don't work for me :C

[VerticalHorizon]

A square?

The image don't work for me :C

Right click>Open image in new tab>Proceed anyway.

[ShadowsfeaR]

Hey, I showed my friend this and he says it's "really forgetin' nice".

[Ningyou]

Whoa, very nice.

[ShadowsfeaR]

Bump for great metal justice.

[Tonkka]

Not to be harsh, but when you use half of the song into ambient noises i expected something better.

The lyrics are horrible, they dont rim at all

I think the music was pretty bad too.

Were you choking in the microphone when you were singing?