Need feed back of a song I've made

[Tomaz]

Athero

Hello, I've made a song that I would like to send to a record label called Monster Cat Media. Before I send it, I want to know what the general public thinks of my song. I hope you enjoy it and hope you can support me.

Links

Sound cloud: http://soundcloud.com/athero-1/hidden-imitations

Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Athero/167520966682140

Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/user/AtheroOffical/videos (Not updated recently)

Thank you

[Ad Bot]

[_Rave_]

Ok, I even put my big ass headphones on just for this.  Better be good, man.

Edit:
It's close, but not quite there.  The sounds clash a little bit.  It's heavy, which is nice, but the synth thingy that is plucking away sounds out of place.

[iBlox / (-Nick-)]

What kind of music do you even call that? Like, do you listen to that on your I-Pod or do you use it in computer games or something else?

[Daedalus]

Repetitive and clashes too much.

[MrMcCakey]

it's really catchy, but the different sounds it makes I think should have more variety

[fred da kiko]

Not available on mobile.


Well then i guess it's stuff.

Good beginning, when the base changes I think you could reverse the follow up. The second part kills my ears. Less static.

Overjoyed is very good. You seem to repeat the same sound too much though, you need to use more dynamic beats.