Author Topic: The Blockland Infection(a blockland story)  (Read 1513 times)

It was July 5th,2095....Russia Had came up with  a new Cure for cancer They tested it on dieing Objects to see if it Was Better then just that,BUT...once they did It Got into the air Causeing a Virus Known as''88HE''It could Cause these 5 Things to the Humen body, No.1 peeling skin. No.2 hazeing eyes,   Pain To the right of the neck. No.3 Hungy for Flesh Causeing Hunger For nothing But Flesh. No.4 Skin changeing color to a light grayish skin texture. No.5 A flesh eating Humen. The U.B(united Blocks) army Was trying to Get Evey State To have hazmats On eveyone,If they didnt do this they will become one of the ''Zombies'' As they called it. Later on that day it was 9:01 Am The first seen zombie was in the U.B The Zombie had got ahold on its vitcum and Began to eat his flesh...Well...Until the U.B army shot it half to death..I said to my self,''Why in the world Did this have to happen?'',I was Kinda scared So i desided To go to the U.B gunshop On 6th ave street to buy a Pistol.''As i looked i around I saw the pistol i wanted'',The guy said to me that I looked to young but then i told him''Its to survive Now get me the pistol.'',I Got the M1911 for 500 bucks Due to it being a vrey famous and good .Chapter 2 Will be Here soon or later soo Tell me what you think? please dont be so rude I try to write good storys,Anyways tell me what you think of this one.
« Last Edit: June 17, 2012, 01:30:22 AM by Bach The Awesome »

That was the worst wall of text ive read all day.

Didn't i just say to not be rude i try to get people to like it Now Shut up and just tell me if its  good Story line

stop writing stories.

Grammar needs some serious work, nothing in the story is original and its not very engaging.

Didn't i just say to not be rude i try to get people to like it Now Shut up and just tell me if its  good Story line

So you want me to Lie?

*cough* Paragraphs *cough*

what the forget did i just read OH NO YOU DON'T DAN

what the forget did i just read OH NO YOU DON'T DAN

forget you

I Got the M1911 for 500 bucks Due to it being a vrey famous and good




No redeeming qualities.

Best read in a while, 10/10

Locking topic Due to yall being mean forgettards Maybe you idiots could tell me what to add to the story to make it better yall dont even deserve to be on blockland.