Listening, will post for each.
These topics get no attention, and it bugs me.
First one is fine, but a bit generic for my tastes; I like stuff that branches from the norm.
Second one is better in that respect. It's definitely something that could fit into a game, without the "gnarly" thrown in, which is fine now, outside of a game.
Unholy ground, interesting, but I don't see how the elements fit together.
